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Dear _____
Thank you for choosing Caribbean weddings my name is XXXXX XXXXX your wedding coordinator I would be very happy to help you in any detail to make your dream wedding. Do you want a civil ceremony or a religious one or both? What time would you like the ceremony? How many guests will be attending? When are you planning the wedding? Would you like to have a ceremony and reception? Do you need a flower bouquet and a boutonniere?I sending the requiriemnts for a civil wedding.
I would like to know how is your dream wedding?
Please don’t hesitate to contact me for any further question you may have
Sincerely
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Dear _____,
Thank you for choosing Caribbean Weddings. My name is XXXXX XXXXX, your wedding coordinator. I would be very happy to help you with all the details to make your dream wedding come true.
Do you want a civil ceremony or a religious one, or both? What time would you like the ceremony? How many guests will be attending? When are you planning the wedding? Would you like to have a ceremony and reception? Do you need a flower bouquet and a boutonniere?
I sending the requirements for a civil wedding.
I would like to know your idea of your dream wedding.
Please don't hesitate to contact me with any questions you may have.
Sincerely,
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Dear _____,
Thank you for choosing Caribbean Weddings.
My name is XXXXX XXXXX, your wedding coordinator. I would be very happy to help you with all the details to make your dream wedding come true.
Do you want a civil ceremony or a religious one? or both? What time would you like the ceremony? How many guests will be attending? When are you planning the wedding? Would you like to have a ceremony and reception? Do you need a flower bouquet and a boutonniere?
I would like to know your idea of your dream wedding.
Please don't hesitate to contact me for any questions you may have.
Sincerely,
PS Attached are the requirements for a civil wedding.
