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NEW>>>Hello. Click through our art studio presentation.

A.K.atelier consists (comprises) from couple XXXXX XXXXX and XXXXX XXXXX. XXXXX is author (bearer) of art ideas. XXXXX's business is the "rest" (all oter things).
They live and work together in Liberec, CZ.

NEW>>>A. K. Atelier is owned and operated by the XXXXXs, XXXXX and XXXXX. XXXXX is the artist. XXXXX does all the rest.

The big ceramic eartworm in the garden of kindergarten functions as a playing element for children. It also separates the grass area from the pavement heading to the school building.

NEW>>>The big ceramic earthworm in the garden of the kindergarten functions as a playground element. It also separates the grass area from the pavement heading to the school building.

The oldiest (historical) park of Praque--Stromovka--has a natural forest park. City noise pierces (carries ) only softly there. /-it dont sound so stupid in czech, but I hope you understant what it means -this is silent oasis in the centre of metropolis, where the city noise is hardly heard./

NEW>>>The oldest park of Prague, Stromovka, has a natural forest in it. This is a silent oasis in the centre of the metropolis where city noises are hardly heard.

City children are suddenly in different world. The old elefant welkomes them by the playground entrance. There aer also other unknown funny animals.

NEW>>>City children are suddenly in a different world. The old elephant welcomes them at the playground entrance. There are also some unknown funny animals there.

The curved paved wawe crookes (corkscrew) the trees lenthways through the whole playground.

NEW>>>The curved path winds through the trees and through the whole playground.

We designed springlers -fountains that would attract children to play with water.
We built them at the place where originally used to be paddling pools.

NEW>>>We designed sprinklers so that children could play with water. We built them where there used to be wading pools.

The descending terrain was used to build a water drive - 20 m artificial riverbed , faced by mosaic. It connect upper and lower tile wet playing area.
The part of project was the design and realisation of the original sand -pit.

NEW>>>The descending terrain was used to build a waterway. This is an artificial riverbed 20 meters long finished in mosaic. It connects the upper and lower tiled water-play areas.

[I don't know what this means.] The part of project was the design and realisation of the original sand -pit.

In the Liberec city centre by the Public Transport Terminal we created a resting spot meant
mainly for parents with small children. Our ,,tortoise " is an animal, that rushes anywhere.
This area has became a pleasant place to stay not only to wait out for bus or tram, but it is also used as a meeting point.

NEW>>>In the center of Liberec by the public transport terminal, we created a rest area meant mainly for parents with small children. Our tortoise is an animal that rushes everywhere. This area has became a pleasant place not only to wait for a bus or tram, but also to use as a meeting point.

In Rochlice, Liberec residential quarter we participated in the renovation project of the public park. We designed and lastly created pleasure spot for the children mainly from the elementary school wich is across the road. The ,,Had" -big ceramic sculpture is the dominant of the place. We also designed and did supporting wall with mosaic and benches.
In opposite part of park we installed three metal sculptures-giant size benches. They are placed to form a triangle facing one to other

NEW>>>In Rochlice, a residential quarter of Liberec, we participated in the renovation of the public park. We designed and created an enjoyable area for children from the elementary school which is across the road. The big ceramic sculpture, "Had", is the dominant feature. We also designed and constructed a supporting wall with a mosaic and benches. In another part of the park we installed three metal sculptures--giant-sized benches. They form a triangle facing one another.

We designed the waste garden as a functional and aestetic unit. We were thinking about little children needs. We devided the garden into several parts , according to their usage.
The playing part is fitted up by ceramic colourfull sand-pit, playing and sport facilities.

NEW>>>We designed the waste[???waste] garden as a functional and aesthetic unit. We were thinking about the needs of little children. We divided the garden into several parts according to their use. The play area has a colourful ceramic sand pit along with play and sport facilities.[???facilities doesn't sound right--need new word for what you mean]

We installed a wood bower(pavilion) and a big hammock in relaxing (resting) part of garden.
There is also other place for original water games ( playing with water?) and for art (creative) activites.
Relief with plant motives on the garden wall contains elementary grafics signs. Teacher / is women working in Kindergarten named teacher?/ use it to acquaint children with the basis of the writing by various special games.

NEW>>>We installed a wood pavilion and a big hammock in a quiet part of the garden. There is also another place to play with water and do other creative things. There is a relief with a plant motif on the garden wall, which also contains elementary graphic symbols. Kindergarten teachers, using various specialized games, acquaint children with the basics of writing .

The playground is placed in rather steep terrain. According to architect intention we designed the snaky shape ceramic wals. They divide this space to some levels and it help to exploit more efectivelly the slooping area.
We designed and realised a waterfountain made from granite, glass and stainless stell for new adapted square in Zelezny Brod. Zelezny in czech means ferrous ( from iron). We used iron as further material in pavement around the fountain.

NEW>>>The playground has a rather steep terrain. In accord with the architect's intention, we designed the snake shape ceramic walkways. They divide this space into levels, and they help to exploit more effectively the sloping area.

NEW>>>We designed and constructed a water fountain made from granite, glass, and stainless steel for a newly adapted[???adopted or designated] square in Zelezny Brod. Zelezny in Czech means ferrous (from iron). We used iron also as a material in the pavement around the fountain.

Not as usual we solved ( the design of) the playground in Praque Letna quarter.We did it by our way. We argeed with investor to emphasise the artistic character of design.
The place is situated in attractive location of the central part of the well-known park in Praque. It adjoint the garden restaurant in front of Letna castle (chateau?)

NEW>>>The design of a playground in the Letna quarter of Prague was totally our own, which is not usual.

NEW>>>We agreed with the investor to emphasise the artistic side of design. The place is situated in an attractive area in the central part of the well known park in Prague. It adjoins the garden of the restaurant in front of Letna castle (chateau?)[???I don't know if it is a castle or a chateau or a mansion--you must choose the right word]

A lot of trees on the small area makes the place intimate and friendly for playing of itself. The exclusive lookout at Praque and the river attract the adult Praquers as well as tourists.
We ,,populed this area by the crawd of coloured animals".
The big sculptures are expressive colours and simply shared.
Children play with them ( it?) by day i the evening they release them to adults ( lend them to adults) or Children play with them during the day and i the evening adult use them for playing too.

NEW>>>A lot of trees in the small area makes the place intimate and friendly for play. The exclusive view of Prague and the river attract the adult locals of Prague as well as tourists. We "populated this area with a crowd of coloured animals". The big sculptures are in expressive colours and simply shared. Children play on them by day; in the evening the children lend them to adults.

The project of the foster home adaptation had two phases. The first was finishing the existing wall with glazed painting ceramic tilling. Kids from the special school for children hard of hearing in Liberec are involved in the painting. This project was finnancially supported by one Dutch donator.
I the second phase the metal gate and the painted window above the main door were realised. The motive of Sun, painted by children was the base for the new foster home logo.

NEW>>>The foster home project had two phases. The first was finishing the existing wall with painted and glazed ceramic tiles. Kids from the school for the hard of hearing in Liberec were involved in the painting. This project was financially supported by one Dutch donor. In the second phase, the metal gate and the painted window above the main door were installed. The sun motif painted by children was the basis for the new foster home logo.